Good job of approaching a stranger. Photo is a dark, but has nice composition and story-telling elements. Make your cutline active tense: Julia Laughlin tries to find a book... Include the 'when' in the cutline. Also, the correct spelling is 'shelves' -- copy edit yourself.
Good job of approaching a stranger. Photo is a dark, but has nice composition and story-telling elements. Make your cutline active tense: Julia Laughlin tries to find a book... Include the 'when' in the cutline. Also, the correct spelling is 'shelves' -- copy edit yourself.
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